"I like the spoon. It was very
interesting because I like the Titanic
and now I’m interested in the Empress
"Thank you for sharing with us. So
far I like how you made them drop the lead in the water. I
wait to read your next book!"
“I really loved your presentation! It was super
“I love the part you read for us!!”
“I liked the part in your presentation when you
showed us how the cover
got put together.”
"I loved the way you read to us. You
used powerful words and used a lot of expression. I learned that if you
use powerful words and descriptive sentences your story will be more
"I want to be a writer some day and your presentation showed
me that it
takes a lot of practice to do that. Thank you. And it helps to do lots
"I learned that you have to redo drafts to make your story
"I learned that by reading you get better at writing. I liked
showed pictures of the shipwreck and also how we played 'The Price is
"I liked it when you read a part of the book. It made me
really want to
read it. I listened to the way you read and I want to be able to read
"I liked the descriptive words in
your story. I think I might buy your book. It was a real grabber."
"I learned that even if writing
isn’t what you want to do try it."
"I liked how you read part of the
story but only part because now I HAVE TO READ YOUR BOOK!"
"When you read it seemed like I was
watching it happen."
"I learned to describe characters and
make it like you’re right there beside them."